Narrative Essay

The problems I had in my narrative essay when I first started it was picking one challenge because I have had several interesting challenges such as death at birth, graduating high school, moving from state to state. So i decided to divide Moving states and Graduating high school in to one story. Once I started writing it I had several grammatical errors, run-on sentences and fragments. I wrote my Narrative out before I typed it I went to several tutors and got help. I proofread my paper, because I several grammatical errors and run-ons and fragments. I didn't have enough dialogue about my issues from me graduating high school. I still feel I have some grammatical errors and some more details I can put into my paper when I receive my grade so I can do my corrections.